-snaps- I like your personification of a girl as the things she wears, associates with, and does. It paints a very clear picture and follows that classic rule--show, don't tell. You also did a good job in your recitation--especially the points where your voice just deadpans. Keep writing!
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I like your personification of a girl as the things she wears, associates with, and does. It paints a very clear picture and follows that classic rule--show, don't tell. You also did a good job in your recitation--especially the points where your voice just deadpans.
Keep writing!